专题23 经历与感受-2025年中考英语写作常考文体提分秘籍

2025年中考英语写作常考文体提分秘籍

专题23 经历与感受

【题型分析】

分析全国中考真题可知此话题在中考中考查较多，主要以讲述自己的亲身经历为主，包括日常生活和学习中的所见所闻、活动经历、学习经历、成长经历、旅游经历、与他人相处的经历等等。

【写作要点】

时间、地点与人物

1． It was a cold winter morning． I was about to be late for school．

2． The touching moment happened on a rainy day．

3． It happened the day before the beginning of the autumn term．

4． Our school trip fell on a fine spring Saturday．

5． We made the date on Sunday afternoon．

6． The match was held on the second Friday of May．

All the people from the town came here．

7． I remember that it was on the Spring Festival Eve．

All of us are busy welcoming the happiest moment．

8． I came across an old professor on a crowded bus．

9． We carried many trees to the foot of the hill that lies in the west of our village．

10． It was in our school gym that the astronaut gave the excellent speech．

11． All the students were in the same clothes and got together in the playground．

12． Our teacher told us to meet at the gate of the Old People’s Home．

13． The old man was a famous painting artist． Later, he became the hero in my heart．

14． Actually, he is an ordinary animal keeper． He always takes good care of the animals patiently．

经过

1． When I was in the eighth grade, I took part in an English speech contest in my school． My English teacher helped me choose a proper topic for my English speech． And she spared time to practice with me every day．

2． I had to deal with cultural differences when I was studying abroad． However difficult it was, I never give up ．I turn to local people and took notes carefully． And I always paid much attention to them when meet people．

3． My father had a chat with me． Though he wasn’t satisfied with my behavior at school, he talked to me a lot calmly．

4． I had trouble in dealing with the physics problem． My physics teacher noticed that and came to guide and show me some ways．

5． I joined the reading club and was required to share a book once a week． Thus I began to pick up books actively and read carefully． The event really helped a lot． I gained much and formed a good habit because of it．

6． I trained hard． No matter it was rainy or snowy, I kept running for forty minutes every morning．

In fact, insisting is a hard job． I felt too tired to go on sometimes． However, nothing in the world is easy． Taking a deep breath, I ran out as usual．

7． The subway was crowded that day, for it was the Dragon Boat Festival． As soon as she saw the old man, she stood up and offered her seat to him．

8． After three hours’ swimming, Hu Dong felt tired and hungry． He rushed to the nearest shop to buy a sandwich． When he stepped out of the shop, he came across a poor beggar． Without thinking twice, she went over to the beggar and gave her sandwich to him．

9．We bought some bread, sandwiches and many bottles of water, and carried them to the playground by bike．

10． Jack played with the children and told them interesting stories during the summer vacation．Sometimes, he brought some delicious food for them． He wanted to cheer them up．

11． My sister and I helped Mum clean the kitchen and water flowers． Then we mopped the floor． After drinking some water, we took out the rubbish．

结果

1． The biggest personal change I’ve ever had is that I have fallen in love with reading．

2． After two years of training, I mastered most of the skills and became a member of the swimming club．

3． He insists on writing every night for an hour and his handwriting has improved a lot．

4． Whenever I have a problem, I can turn to my mother and she will guide me to succeed in dealing with it．

5． In the end, the poor kid was saved and sent to hospital． Bruce was tired but felt happy to do do that．

6．Attracted by the beautiful scenery, I quickly climbed up the mountain to enjoy the natural view．

7． With the encouragement and guidance of my Chinese teacher, I become confident not only in study but also in life．

8．It was at that time that I made up my mind to work hard to give my parents a better life in the future．

9．Finally, we reached an agreement that every vacation we would make different kinds of paper cuttings to sell in the market．

》感受

1． The feeling of pride rose in my heart．

2． After the experience, I was too excited to fall asleep．

3． From the experience, I learned the value of teamwork．

4． Nothing is more meaningful to me than helping others．

5． Thanks to my friends, I got through the hard times finally．

6． It was such an interesting trip that I would never forget it．

7． I was so grateful to him that I made a decision to pass the love to others from then on．

8． I hope all the teenagers can behave well and set good examples for the younger．

9． I think it is very important to learn from others’ strengths and make up for our own weaknesses．

10． From then on, I became more and more confident, and I decided to try my best to study Chinese as well as other subjects．

11． How excited and moved I was when I accepted the help from a woman on the bus!

12． I was so excited that my tears poured out as I ran through the finish line．

13． I have learned from the experience that I’ll never know how excellent I am without taking the chance to try．

14． I was proud of myself because I had the courage to try a and face the difficulties bravely．

俗语谚语

1． Well began is half done．好的开始是成功的一半。

2． Interest is the best teacher．兴趣是最好的老师。

3． Practice makes perfect． 敦能生巧

【话题范文】

1．读万卷书，行万里路。近年来，参观博物馆、看工厂、访农村等形式多样的研学活动，极大地丰富了中学生的课余生活。请你根据以下要点及要求，描述自己曾经的一次研学旅行经历。

要点：

（1）研学地点、时间、交通工具、研学过程；

（2）研学旅行的收获和感受；

（3）研学旅行的重要性。

要求：

（1）文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；

（2）词数100左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。

Study tour is more and more popular these days． Now, let me tell you one of my study tours．

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2．初中生活转瞬即逝。在这四年里，你可能学会了一项体育技能，或参加了一次精彩的演讲；也可能开展了一次有意义的研学，或参与了一项社团活动……这些都助力了你的成长，让你终身受益。最近，你们学校英语广播站正在开展以“难忘的时刻”为主题的征文活动，假如你是李华，请写一篇短文参赛，内容包括：

1．活动过程简介；

2．令你难忘的时刻；

3．你的感想。

注意：

1．词数100左右；

2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3．不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。

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3．学校英文报正在举办主题为“我的变化”的征文活动。请结合你的经历，以 “I Have Changed a Lot” 为题，用英文写一篇短文，向学校英文报投稿。

写作提示：

1． What did you use to be like?

2． What is the the most important change and how did it happen?

3． What have you learned from the experience?

写作要求：

1． 短文包含以上要点，可以适当发挥；

2． 不少于80词，语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写规范，卷面整洁。

3． 短文中不得出现任何真实人名、校名及其他相关信息。

I Have Changed a Lot

How time flies! I’m now in Grade 9 and I have changed a lot in the last few years．

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4．亲爱同学们，时光荏苒，九年级上学期的学习生活已悄然落幕，在这个充满挑战与机遇的学期里，你一定经历了许多，也收获了满满的成长；中考的战鼓愈发急促，需要你做好充分准备迎接挑战。假设你是杨林，请根据下面的写作要点写一篇日记，肯定一学期积极努力的自己，也祝愿自己下学期与更多的美好相遇。

写作要点：

1． 本学期的经历和收获：遇到的困难；解决的过程；要感谢的人。

2． 下学期的期许和计划：下学期的目标，预定的计划。

写作要求：

1． 表达清晰，过渡合理，衔接自然，结构完整；

2． 不得使用真实的人名、校名等相关信息；

3． 词数100左右。

Dear Diary,

Time flies! The first term of Grade 9 has nearly come to an end． Looking back, I’m really proud of what I’ve achieved．

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5．初三的学习生活宛如紧张刺激的马拉松比赛，总是充满挑战，在一些艰难时刻，是谁帮助了你？请以My Inspiring Story为标题写一篇不少于80词的英语短文，让我们一同分享在困境中汲取力量、砥砺奋进的故事，传递向上的青春正能量。

要求：1． 讲述一个自己的故事；

2． 你的感悟；

3． 适当增加细节，行文连贯；

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6．提示：美其实无处不在，它不仅体现在自然山川之美、艺术创造之美，还蕴藏于日常生活、学习过程或个人成长之中。请以“The Beauty Around Us”为题，写一篇英语短文，叙述你感受到的美。

要求：

1． 紧扣主题、语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁，词数不少于80个；

2． 文中不得使用考生的真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计；

3． 请将短文写在答题卡上，写在本试题卷上无效。

The Beauty Around Us

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7．生活当中总是充满意外，有各种形形色色的经历，有开心的、倒霉的、尴尬的、幸运的、难过的……请你根据下面提示以“An Unexpected Day”为题写一篇短文，描述自己的一次意外经历，并谈谈感受。

提示：

1．What was the date? What happened first?

2．Was this lucky or unlucky? Why?

3．What happened next?

4． How did the day end?

5． How did you feel about this day?/What did you learn from it?

要求：

1．短文必须包含提示中所提供的所有信息，可适当发挥；

2．文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名；

3．词数80—100；标题已给出。

An Unexpected Day

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8．假定你是李华，请根据邮件内容，用英语给Sandy回复。

要求：1． 词数不少于 80，开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数；

2． 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3． 文中不要出现任何真实人名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。

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参考答案

1．例文

Study tour is more and more popular these days． Now, let me tell you one of my study tours．

A school tour is a good way to put what you have learnt into practice． We went to Zhengzhou Science and Technology Museum last Sunday first． We got there by bus． We saw many fantastic inventions and did some scientific experiments． Then we went to the Wildlife Park． We got close contact with different kinds of wild animals and birds and learned a lot about their living habits．

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