专题09 书面表达-2024-2025学年七年级英语下册期中复习专项训练（译林版2024新教材）

2024-2025学年七年级英语下册期中复习专项训练

专题09 书面表达

一、满分写作核心技巧

1．结构清晰

三段式结构：

开头（观点/主题句）→ 主体（2-3个论点+例子）→ 结尾（总结+升华）。

万能框架：

开头：Nowadays, … / It is widely believed that…

中间：Firstly, … Secondly, … What’s more…

结尾：In a word, … / I hope…

2．语言升级

替换低级词汇：

good → excellent/beneficial

important → vital/crucial

like → enjoy/be fond of

多用复合句：

定语从句：This is the book that I borrowed from the library．

状语从句：If we work hard, we will achieve our dreams．

3．内容饱满

举例法：For example, … / Take… as an example．

数据法：According to a survey, 70% of students…

对比法：On the one hand… On the other hand…

4．避免硬伤

时态统一（记叙文用过去时，议论文用一般现在时）。

标点符号正确（句尾用句号，逗号后空格）。

字数达标（80-100词左右，宁多勿少）。

二、高频题型模板

1． 议论文（观点类）

题目：Should students use smartphones?

模板：

> 开头：Smartphones have become a hot topic． Some people think…, while others believe…

> 主体：

> – Firstly, smartphones help us study (e．g． search information)．

> – However, spending too much time on phones may harm our eyes．

> 结尾：In my opinion, we should use smartphones wisely．

2． 记叙文（故事类）

题目：An Unforgettable Experience

模板：

> 开头：I will never forget the day when…

> 主体：

> – What happened: One sunny afternoon,…

> – Feelings: I felt nervous at first, but…

> 结尾：This experience taught me that…

3． 应用文（书信/邮件）

题目：给笔友Tom写回信，介绍你的周末活动

模板：

> Dear Tom,

> How are you? I’m writing to tell you about my last weekend．

> 内容：

> – On Saturday, I went hiking with my family．

> – On Sunday, I finished my homework and watched a movie．

> 结尾：I hope to hear from you soon!

> Yours,

> Li Hua

三、提分细节

开头结尾万能句：

开头：With the development of society…

结尾：Only in this way can we…

过渡词升级：

并列：not only… but also…

转折：however/actually

因果：as a result/therefore

卷面加分：

字迹工整，分段明确（每段空一行）。

用笔规范（黑色签字笔，勿涂改）。 

单元话题精练

基础入门训练7篇

1．假设你是Li Hua，你的英国笔友Tony想了解你的家及你的社区。请根据以下提示，给他写一封电子邮件。

提示：

1． 你家的位置、房子类型、房间布局；

2． 你所在社区的情况(如：基础设施、环境、邻居等)

要求：

1． 包含以上提示内容，可适当发挥；

2． 语言表达准确，语意通顺、连贯；

3． 80词左右，邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Tony,

I’m glad to tell you something about my home and my community．

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I really love my home and my community． What about yours? Write to me soon．

Best wishes,

Li Hua

2．中国传统服装越来越受年轻人的欢迎。假如《学习周报》正在以“Traditional Chinese Clothes”为主题举办征文活动。请根据以下提示，写一篇英语短文进行投稿。

1． 介绍你最喜欢的中国传统服装（风格、材质······）；

2． 喜欢的理由；

3． 如何向全世界推广的建议。

In recent years, more and more young people would like to try traditional Chinese clothes． They become a new fashion．

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3．每个人都有自己的梦想家园。根据下列提示，设计你自己梦想的家园。不少于90词，可以适当发挥。

1． What is your dream home like?

2． How many rooms are there in your dream home and what are they?

3． What things are in it?

．．．．．．．．

My dream home

I’m glad to share my ideas about my dream home． _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

4．Do you like your own home? Do you want a better one? What’s your dream home like? Please write an article about your dream home．

注意事项：1)短文必须包括所给内容要点，要求语句通顺，意思连贯；

2)词数：70词左右；

3)短文必须写在答题卷对应的位置上，写在试卷其他部位无效。

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5．Millie的朋友Sandy下周来扬州玩，根据下表提示帮Millie写一封信， 邀请她来扬州玩时住在自己家里。

要求:

1． 词数100左右；短文中不得出现真实的人名、班级名；

2． 短文应包括表格内所有内容要点，不要逐条翻译，可适当发挥，使短文连贯通顺。

Dear Sandy,

I’m happy to know that you will visit Yangzhou next week． I’d like to invite you to stay at my home．

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Welcome to Yangzhou! Welcome to my home．

Best wishes!

6．俗话说“远亲不如近邻”。近日，某英文报正在举行题为“My neighbourhood”的征文活动。假设你是李华，住在阳光社区，请根据以下问题提示要点，完成一篇英文征文稿。

What is your neighbourhood like?

What are your neighbours like?

How do you feel to live in your neighbourhood?

注意事项： 1． 表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；

2． 必须回答上面问题，并作适当发挥，80词左右；

3． 开头已给出，不计入总词数。

My neighbourhood

I’m Li Hua． I live in Sunshine Community． ________________

7．假设你是李华，你的美国笔友Emily对中国的社区生活很感兴趣。请你结合思维导图，给她写一封电子邮件，介绍你所在社区的情况。

请按需求选用参考词汇：

Places: Community Centre; Fix-it Club; …

Activities: give away old books; repair broken bicycles; take care of pets; do exercise; …

注意：

1． 词数90左右，邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；

2． 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。

Dear Emily,

I’m happy to tell you about my community．

_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

What about your community? I’m looking forward to your reply．

Best wishes,

Li Hua

 进阶拓展训练7篇

8．假设你是李明，你的网友Tom对你的家乡无锡很感兴趣，请根据以下提示以“My hometown”为主题，写一封邮件向他介绍你的家乡，包括以下要点：

注意：

(1)要点清楚，语言流畅；

(2)字数90字左右；

(3)开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

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参考答案

1．例文

Dear Tony,

I’m glad to tell you something about my home and my community．

I live in a comfortable apartment on the fifth floor of a building in a great community． My apartment has a living room and dining area． Next to it is a modern kitchen． There are two bedrooms． One is my personal space, and the other is a guest room． Besides, there is a tidy bathroom．

The community is wonderful． People can exercise in a fitness center, and there is a small but beautiful garden for relaxing． The environment is clean and quiet, with trees and flowers everywhere． My neighbors are very nice． We often meet in the hallway and have friendly conversations．

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