专题01 记叙文之写人型-2025年中考英语写作常考文体提分秘籍

2025年中考英语写作常考文体提分秘籍

专题01 记叙文之写人型

一、题型解读与写作攻略

1．题型解读

记叙文是以记人叙事为主要内容的文章，通常包括六个要索:时间、地点、人物、事件、原因及结果，写作时各要素要交代清楚，但并不要求全部具备。

人物描写类的作文， 大多围绕亲情、友情、师生情、榜样力量、人物奋斗等话题展开，或叙事抒怀，或表明个人对人物所持的情感。此类文章以记叙文居多，也可夹叙夹议。

人物描写的文章，对人物各方面的描写是必不可少的外貌描写、语言描写、神态描写、动作描写、心理描写等等，写人离不开写事，因为人物的特点总是在具体的事例中表现出来的。

2．写作攻略

在写人的时候，我们可以通过以下三部分来写作：

简单介绍人物的概况，般包括姓名 、性别、年龄、职业、家庭背景等。写作时使用的语青必须符合英语表达习惯如：姓名的书写、年龄的表达、人称或称呼的法取等。

从多方面对人物进行刻面。为了使人物的形象丰满起来，给读者留下深刻印象，我们可以对人物的外貌、神态、动作等进行描写，并选取简短的事例来说明其品质和个性。在具体写作时，要正确把握现在时、过去时和将来时的用法。

对人物进行评价。在文章结尾处要介绍你对人物的评价或谈论你的个人感受，无论是喜欢还是讨厌，是称赞还是批评，都要明确地表达出来。

【写作方法】

第一段：人物介绍：引出要写的人物并做基本介绍。例如：年龄、外貌、身份、性格等；

第二段： 叙述典型事例：通过事例说明这个人的性格、品质等；

第三段：对人物的评价：或夸赞或指责或者从事例中得到的感受、启示等。

二、高分模板素材

1．常用词语

外表 Appearance

lovely, handsome, sweet, good-looking, odd-looking, handsome, beautiful, pretty, ugly, neat (小巧的), plain (相貌平平的)

身高 Height

tall, short, of medium / average height (中等身高), 1．72 meters tall / in height

Figure 身材

fat, stout (粗壮的或肥胖的), thin, slim / slender (苗条的), skinny (骨瘦如柴), overweight (超重的), of medium / average build (中等身材), well-built (体格健美的), strong, athletic (强壮的)

脸型 Face

long , square (方的), round, oval-shaped / heart-shaped face (瓜子脸), with wrinkles / wrinkled (有皱纹的)

头发 Hair

dark, black, blond, grey, brown, yellow, red, long, short, straight, curly (卷发的), in curls, pigtail (马尾辫), bald (秃顶的)

Facial expression 面部表情

innocent, serious, sad, angry, bitter, disturbed (烦恼的), embarrassed, confused, frightened, pitiful, reluctant (勉强的), excited, indifferent (不在乎的), delighted, surprised, content, disappointed, amused, amazed, flushed (脸红的), pale, blank, doubtful

Character & Personality 个性

lazy kind strict patient brave

careful careless clever confident dishonest

easygoing happy hard-working helpful helpless

honest humorous lively outgoing polite

popular quiet shy lovely funny

家庭背景

live in ．．． 居住在．．．．．．

be born in ．．． 出生于．．．．．．

spent one’s childhood in ．．． 在．．．．．．度过童年

live a happy/busy life 过着幸福/忙碌的生活

教育背景

be graduated from ．．． 毕业于 ．．．．．．

be majored in ．．． 以．．．．．．为专业

further education 深造

got a ．．． degree 得到．．．．．．学位

studied hard at ．．． 努力学习 ．．．．．．

study abroad 出国留学

兴趣爱好

be good at 擅长 do well in 擅长

be fond of 喜欢 enjoy doing sth 喜欢做某事

be crazy about ．．． 对．．．．．．着迷 have a gift for ．．． 有 ．．．．．．天赋

be interested in ．．． 对．．．．．．感兴趣 be in the lead 处于领先的地位

评价

knowledgeable 知识渊博的 famous 著名的

well-known 知名的 think highly of ．．． 对．．．．．．评价很高

be remembered as 被后人誉为．．．．．． be regarded as ．．． 被当作．．．．．．

be respected by ．．． 受．．．．．．尊敬 devote one’s lifetime to ．．． 倾注毕生精力在．．．．．．

逻辑连接词

表示原因的连接词: because; for; as; since; because of; owing to; due to;thanks to; as a result of; result from

表示结果的连接词: thus; hence; so; so that; therefore; as such; as a result

表示相似点的连接词: like; likewise; too; also; similarly; as well; equally important; not only．but also

表示转折的连接词: but; yet; however; nevertheless; nonetheless

表示例子的连接词: for example; for instance; such as; including; like; as; a case in point; take． as an example

表示递进的连接词: and; besides; moreover; what is more; furthermore; in addition; in addition to

2．常用句型

(1)开头：介绍基本情况(外貌、年龄．．．)

1． Once there was a 从前，有一个……

2． was/were born in/into a poor/rich family．

……出生在一个贫穷的/富裕的家庭。

3． As a child of．…years old．． 还是个……岁的孩子时……

4． There will be(a party/speech/contest/concert．．)to be held byin．(place)at．．(time)．

一场派对/比赛/音乐会将在某时某地由……举办

5． In the past ……years ……has impressed me deeply．

在过去的……年里……给我留下了深刻的印象。

6． In my life the person I will never forget is my father．

在我的生命中，我永远也不会忘记的人是我的父亲。

7．There are many respectable people around us． Among them, ．．． is regarded as my favorite one．

8．When it comes to the person who I think highly of, I would say ．．． without hesitation．

9．Among the outstanding figures in Chinese history, ．．． is my favorite．

10．．．．, aged 18, was born in．．．, graduating from．．．

11．In the depths of my memory, ．．．

(2)主体：具体事迹，性格

1． gives us the impression that ……给我们……印象。

2． spend his childhood in……在……度过了他的童年。

3． I was about to when 我正要……，突然，……

4． Hardly had I done when sooner had I done than我刚……，就……/我一……，就……

5． He worked hard every day to make money to keep our family．

他每天都努力工作赚钱来供养我们的家庭。

6． He always wears casual clothes like jeans and T-shirt． 他总是穿着像牛仔和T恤之类的便装。

7． Her eyes are very big/bright/warm/attractive． 她的眼睛很大/很亮/很温暖/很有魅力。

8． One day, I 有一天，我……

9．have a good sense of humor and positive attitude to life

10．be awarded sth．/ be honored as

11．get a master’s degree in/ be admitted to

12．His charming personality lies in a simple fact that he never hesitates to help others．

13．make remarkable progress in

14．became famous in one’s thirties

15．set a good example to

16．work heart and soul

17．Although he has won countless honours, he never shows any sign of pride．

(3)结尾：人物评价

1． It turns out to be 结果是……

2． I was very tired, but I was happy that I did a good deed． 我很疲惫，但我很高兴自己做了一件好事。

3． Now I understand my father’s love to me． I will never forget my father．

现在我明白了父亲对我的爱。我永远不会忘记我的父亲。

4． From it, I understand we should not cheat anyone, especially my parents．

从这件事中，我明白了我们不应该欺骗任何人，尤其是我们的父母。

5.That is．．．,my most respectable person．She is the star glowing with high school experience． She is the fragrant rose that beautifies my life．

I have made many good friends． （引出人物）is one of

them． She is （总体给人的感觉）． She is tall and

（身材）． Her hair is （头发）． She always

wears （表情）and gives us the impression that

（给人的印象）．

is always willing to （性格）． She is good

at （特长）． Whenever I have problems I ．

Once （引出事例）． To my surprise, ．

We will , but I hope （表达愿望）．

【写作注意事项】

a． 写人主要从人物外貌、年龄、身份、籍贯、性格、兴趣爱好、特长等方面描述；

b． 要注意最好使用不同句式以免句式单一；

c． 在描写人的外貌时，常用一般现在时，人称常用第一人称或第三人称；

d． 要抓住所描写人物的典型特征。

1．在初中三年里，同学们都发生了很大的变化。假如你是来自初三(1)班的学生李华，你校的英语报正在举行以“How I’ve Changed”为主题的征稿活动。请你用英语写一篇文章投稿。

内容包括：

1． 你在初中三年里发生的变化(包括外貌、性格、爱好等方面)，灵活运用所学短语used to；

2． 谈谈这些变化给你带来的影响(至少写两点)；

3． 期待自己将来有更多更好的变化。

写作要求：

1． 不得在文章中出现学校的真实名称和学生的真实姓名；

2． 语句连贯，词数80左右。文章的开头已经给出，不计入总词数。

How I’ve Changed

In the past few years, my appearance, personality and even my hobbies have changed a lot．

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2．青少年时期是一个人成长的重要阶段。处于这一时期的你经历了哪些身体和心理上的变化呢？学校英文报Teens栏目正在以“How I’ve Changed!”为题开展征文活动。请你根据下列提示，用英文写一篇110词左右短文投稿，分享你在外貌、个性、爱好和能力这四个方面的变化，并具体讲述其中最重要的一个变化，谈谈你从这个变化中得到的启发。

注意：（1）开头已给，不计入总词数；（2）文中不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等。

How I’ve Changed!

In the past few years, I’ve changed a lot cloth physically and mentally．

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3．榜样，就是那些闪耀着奋进之光的人，他们为我们指引方向。在你的成长过程中，一定有很多值得你学习的榜样，比如老师、亲人、朋友……假如你是李华，学校英语社团将举办主题为“The person I admire”的演讲比赛，请你根据以下提示，用英语写一篇介绍自己老师的演讲稿。

要求：(1)包含提示要点，可适当发挥；

(2)语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；

(3)文章不得出现你的任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等)；

(4)词数：不少于70词。(开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。)

The person I admire

Hello, everyone! I’m Li Hua．

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参考答案

1．例文

How I’ve Changed

In the past few years, my appearance, personality and even my hobbies have changed a lot．

I used to be small, but now I am taller and stronger． I used to be shy, but now I am outgoing and good at communicating with people． My hobbies have changed, too． I used to like reading books by myself, but now I prefer to take part in sports activities, especially playing football．

These changes are of great importance to me． The change in my appearance has made me more confident and more popular． The change of hobbies makes me make more friends and my life becomes more colorful．

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